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Excerpt #2: Your Chains Don't Bind Me Draft One


Hey everyone to day I decided to share the last few scenes that I wrote and I found this picture on google and thought it matched the scenes pretty well because there is a dark alley. So I hope you enjoy this excerpt and I hope you all have a wonderful weekend!! :)

Also a little side note, please do not steel any of my work! I would really appreciate that and i'm sharing parts of my work because I want people to be able to read some of it. Thank you!! :)

“Nathaniel won’t be happy about this but father sure will be.” He laughs coldly. Sheer terror flows through me and I want to say something but I can’t even open my mouth. He’s bound me with his magic to not speak or move. It’s like I’m stuck in my own mind. He walks us out of the room and keeps a firm grip on my arm. The next thing I knew his pitch black wings were outstretched and he is holding me close as we fly to the end of the hall breaking through the window and reaching outside. I don’t have time to ask any questions, mainly because I’m unable to breathe with how fast we are flying. I don’t even have time to look around and see where we are going. Ten minutes later we touch ground again and when he lets go I stumble backwards and as soon as I regain my balance I one glance at Nathaniel’s brother and then turn on my heal and run. I get about two feet when the demon flew down in front of me and blocked my way. My head turns this way and that trying to find a way out of wherever I am but I don’t see a way out except up. But I also don’t want to fly and get taken down again. My heart pounds faster than ever and I expect my chest to explode. I look everywhere to avoid looking at the devil prince standing in front of me, but eventually my eyes do fall upon but not by choice, he makes me with a wave of his hand. Black smoke swirls around him as he walks over to me with slow and careful steps. Once I’m able to catch my breath and breathe again, I feel as though I can finally speak but, when I do, my words come out in staggered breaths.

“Where am I? Where is my family?” I ask him at tears sting my eyes from the sudden pain he’s sent flowing through my veins. The pain is searing hot. I don’t really know what he is doing to me but I wish it to stop. The searing hot pain brings me awkwardly to my knees. The Prince stands over me with a sly smirk and I feel as though I want to punch him.

“What are you doing to me? Where am I and where is my family?” I say in with each breath. He’s making it harder and harder for me to breath. I want to scream, but I don’t know if I’m still on earth or in the Underworld and I don’t know if I will be able to get anyone’s attention. He doesn’t say anything but he is defiantly getting under my skin. I feel like the world is closing in and when I try to gasp for air I am greeted with nothing. Does Nathaniel know this is happening? I wish he was here to save me and my family? I wish I had enough power to stop him. My world is spinning around me and it won’t stop spinning. He stands over me now looking at me with those murderous brown eyes that I just want to gouge out. He starts to raise a hand that I am now realizing has a knife in it and is about to bring it down towards me when a crashing noise in the distant. We both look around for the source of the noise and I soon start to realize that we are at the end of a narrow alley way.


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